Make another chapter! Plz plz plz plz

Its end to Sad you nowc _.

I like it but POOR PAI! Heartbreak right after love? that's harsh. Excellent bit of writing though :) Good job. I agree though, Pai totally should have told Lettuce he loved her, or at least Zakuro, I think they all should have paired up before the end

poor sardon(pai)

Bubble Gum your amazing at this. I hope you'll read my Tokyo Mew Mew story. Your my Hero.

Hmm, I'm suprised you didn't have any form of review yet, weird...

Anyway, the story was alright, in fact, it hit every fact right on the head and came out with the most probable solution. But, well... I need to be honest here. Pai seemed WAY too much like Kish, it would have been cooler if he could somehow stay himself before confessing to Lettuce. And Lettuce seemed very much herself, you kept her in character, so that's good! :) Ryou was also well in character. So to sum up, it was only Pai really who was OOC, but otherwise this was a good fic.

It's kinda daring to take on such an idea, taking Kish and Ichigo's situation and reflecting it to see what it would look like with Lettuce and Pai, very creative! Keep working hard to make more good fics!