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sapphireswimming chapter 1 . 9/3/2012
Oh man, poor Ed having to lose his dad twice! At least Alfons is there to help pick up the pieces.
Shizuku Tsukishima749 chapter 1 . 8/15/2012
AW! *U* SO CUTE! I hate it that Hohenheim left him AGAIN here, even if it were to find a way to get Ed home, but UGH! So sad! LOVE this, though! Yay for Alfons being the awesome rocketry sweetie he is! *U* Love this! Rock on!
starfire2rav chapter 1 . 10/4/2011
alfooooonnsssss!
shadowtheo chapter 1 . 3/22/2011
I'm reviewing! ;D I thought that was great! Not overdone and yet touching as well, especially your simple description of Amestris, that was about perfect :) Really lovely
LunesWraith chapter 1 . 2/23/2011
Her I was disappointed to realize this was a one-shot :O Can you make it a story please? :D It's well written and interesting, so good job!
AlistairAmore chapter 1 . 1/18/2011
Aw, i like it!

Alfonse does need more love.
Kristen Sharpe chapter 1 . 1/17/2011
Aw. Admittedly, you ended up making me sniffle more for Ed than Alfons, but it's sad for the both of them. The bit immediately after Hohenheim leaves when Ed comes home to an empty house and then the final lines are especially poignant.