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![]() ![]() ![]() Oh man, poor Ed having to lose his dad twice! At least Alfons is there to help pick up the pieces. |
![]() ![]() ![]() AW! *U* SO CUTE! I hate it that Hohenheim left him AGAIN here, even if it were to find a way to get Ed home, but UGH! So sad! LOVE this, though! Yay for Alfons being the awesome rocketry sweetie he is! *U* Love this! Rock on! |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I'm reviewing! ;D I thought that was great! Not overdone and yet touching as well, especially your simple description of Amestris, that was about perfect :) Really lovely |
![]() ![]() ![]() Her I was disappointed to realize this was a one-shot :O Can you make it a story please? :D It's well written and interesting, so good job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw, i like it! Alfonse does need more love. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw. Admittedly, you ended up making me sniffle more for Ed than Alfons, but it's sad for the both of them. The bit immediately after Hohenheim leaves when Ed comes home to an empty house and then the final lines are especially poignant. |