Really quick and stupid. Hate it.
-M

lol love it :)

I can say this story was alright but it feels a bit rushed. Still good though.

grate job

but Kaoru didn't speak as much as Hikaru

and you could put in a cut line like "The next day in school" or something like that

but i would like to read some of your other HikaKao stories -

Haha! That was funny! I want to get an appointment with Dr. Hikaru...

Nice job :D