Sorry, not to be rude or anything bit "De Nada" translates to 'your welcome'. I would recommend "Es Nada" instead.

May I ask, are you a fluent French speaker?

I see that someone has mentioned the words Mary Sue - pay no attention to him/her/whoever.

I don’t really like it when you start going into the Mary Sue part. Foremost because calling a character a “Mary Sue” is used to dismiss and disregard them. Secondly, the word itself “Mary Sue” is gendered female. Why? Mostly because the characters that get cut down the most are female characters. Iron Man is never called a “Mary Sue (Gary Stu)” A good number of the main male heroes in pretty much any shounen (boys) anime (which is pretty much the only anime these days that is on TV) is never broken down like this. It is a term reserved ONLY to female characters.

So we have another gendered term being used against mostly female characters to dismiss them for, what? Being a female power fantasy? I think women need their over the top, perfect, power fantasies too.

A good number of male characters fit into being “the mary sue”. They are perfect, everyone loves them, their power is always unexpected and grand and impresses all the friends and foes alike. And these characters are considered AWESOME and “I wanna be that character.” Characters like Harry Potter, Iron Man, Naruto, Ichigo (Bleach), James Bond, etc. However flip the genders and suddenly “Oh it’s just a Mary Sue character. DISMISSED!”

Mary Sue is a sexist term used to enforce the misogynistic ideals that female characters/authors shouldn't be allowed to fantasize or write anything along the lines of wish fulfillment. Its misogynistic qualities are exemplified in many ways, most notably being the fact that it's not a term dominated by the male counterpart despite existing in a patriarchal society, as well as the fact that the male counterpart is largely undecided upon in name and also undefined.

It's usually used on the whole to bully new authors out of writing female characters altogether, making the task seem so daunting to some that they now only write slash fictions with two male characters, also exemplifying the misogynistic qualities this term involves.

Besides, after Stephenie Meyer's success with the Twilight saga, which is a HUGE Mary Sue, any arguments of Suedom are now invalid. Keep on writing!.

-Alexy

she seems a bit mary sueish idk...
your writing style is awesome on a better note

Oh God Why?

NO.

NO, BAD JAPAN.

YAOI :C

OMIGOSH UPDATE THIS PLEASE! IT IS AWESOME!

Love the story! Can't wait for the next chapter! Also, the concept seems actually quite dark, but the humor masks everything! Ciao till tomorrow!

I love how you descride everything. It's a nice change.

I have really enjoyed the story so far. :D I hope you will feel some motivation to continue this story one day.

please update the stories really good

What is going to happen to the girl and will UK fall in love withe her or not and will Russia get her or not keep going best store ever

Is that a Black Butler ll reference i see there?

Haha nice story so far, I really like it :D

I love this please update soon...

can't wait for more

duude i love this chapter D when are you gonna post the next chapter... i wanna know what happened with America and Julie D !