Aiaiaiaiai eu tô é morta com essa fic! Eu não curto muito vouyerism mas o sei tá muito bem escrito e eu gostei muito! Espero que você continue escrevendo!

Poor Snape. You write him beautifully. Interesting to imagine that he has a minor crush on Minerva. Also, Dumbledore can't wait 30 seconds to have his wife? Brilliant :D

Hah, great job! On one hand, I feel sorry for Snape, but on the other, this was hella funny :D

Fans self vigorously-whoa! Nice little vignette about the inadvisability of listening in...snicker.

LOL That was incredibly funny!

It is a pleasure to read your writing. It comes across so effortlessly and you have such a way with these characters.

Aw man, poor Snape. I feel so bad for him all the time. You write him wonderfully. I love the balance, in this and other fics, that you find between his heroic and sullen, mean selves.

Interesting story. A minor note, which may have already been mentioned. Tonks' name is Nymphadora her mother is Andromeda.