This seems like this will turn into an even more interesting story than it already is.

Why hasn't his been updated, it's rare o see Denzel pulled into the past with Cloud

Awwww! Future!Zack and Arieth help out Genesis and Angeal! That was adorable! XD

On the chance that you decide to continue this someday, I'll be following it. If you ever decide to write more, I would definitely be interested in reading. :)

This story is full of win. I loved the moment Zack and Aerith interfered.

I admit to being confused about the thing about Tifa, though. Why did Cloud call her stupid after thinking about not being a child? Maybe I'm just missing something here.

Awesome chapter. Keep going!

This was very good and I have enjoyed it thus far. I look forward to the next update.

Reviewpart: I noticed nothing that I can recall... which means nothing stuck out like a sore thumb...

Sounds interesting so far, although I sense some major mayhem somewhere around the next corner ... ;)

Interesting story. Where is the younger Cloud? Can't wait for Cloud and Denzel to meet him. Please update soon!

he guessed! sniff well i never!
update soon it would be funny to see seph and cloud meeting with denzel there i wonder who would win a fight between them

This looks very interesting. This is the second Denzel Cloud going back in time fic that I have read as this one looks better than the other one.

Can't wait for an update.

are you going to continue this story?

I really like the idea of cloud getting sent back & NOT deliberatly trying to change things, but changing them anyway, (that is what you meant when you said it was inspired by the Fifth Act right?)

I'd like to see this one continued.

Wow! This is interesting! I wonder who's the second person that Beckah has seen with mako eyes. Jenova's not in the reactor? Because if she is, wouldn't it be easier to kill her first? Or maybe it's Cloudy's job to destroy Jenova and Cloud is here for a vacation? I hope that the next chapter come up soon! :D

I admit, I'm crazy for timetravel/second chance fics, and "The Fifth Act" was one of the best ones I've read, so I'm eager to see how it influenced you. That said, I *LOVE* your opening. Openings are, aside from descriptions, THE most important part of the story for catching a reader's attention, and you did that well for me. Gold star!

I like this idea! Very interesting! Can't wait to read more. :)

Seems interesting. I look forward to seeing this continue.

Hope to see more of where this is going! XD