Poor Edward :( My heart went out to him. Jacob is such a douche!

this story is not finished you need to put up a sequel or sumthin

Is this the whole story. I hope not I really like your Edward.

This is really good I would love to read more if there is more.

Well Jacob seems like a heartless asshole

Please update when you can, I would

like to see what happens next. I like

how this story is written so far.

I'm in Track too and I'm trying out for Plays at my local theatre I know how u feel. Great story please make a sequel if u have the time.

omg u should so continue this! lol

this would make a great story :)

I really like your story :)

It would be great if you could continue this

that was sad. maybe you can make this into a chapter story plz plz ... you can do so much with this and make Jasper the main charater since he is Edward's est friend you can make into more. huh? that sound good? heheh plz

but anyway it was good.

till next time bye now

I actually really liked that so I'm hoping that it'll be more than a oneshot. Please tell me you'll make this into a full story and please tell me you'll feature Jasper as a major character. I can really genuinely see this turning out to be a very very good story.

I really like this idea :3

But I hate Jacob now w

Please write a sequel!

Very good, I liked it a lot. What is up Jacob!

I like this one! :D

i love it plz continue :)