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Please. I'm enjoying this so much. You must continue.

Hello i am a new user of this website. My I just say that this is hands down the best crossover i have read thus far. I would like to add that you did great honor to each of the franchise names involved. Please update so i can know how they beat the metal gears.

I'm surprised they could hear each other over those chimes. When I went to a Metallica concert, we wore earplugs, ciuldn't hear each other, but heard every note. Still really enjoying the story!

You know why the system overloaded? Because Norton is a resource hog. That's why I always uninstall its free trials. :D

I'm enjoying this. I don't know all the tories but you write everyone well enough that I don't feel i'm missing out.

Well, that's odd. Not entirely sure what all is going on, but I trust things will get sorted out eventually. This is turning into quite the massive crossover event.

Poor Cloud. Being so close to Tifa and not being able to touch her or even let her know he's there.

Okay, I understand that it's a great opportunity to show Link's skills (not that you haven't had that opportunity before), but it doesn't make sense for Cloud to run up a tree when confronted with a monster of that size. Have you watched Advent Children? Bahamut Sin is probably about the size of that bear and Cloud took that on mostly solo. (Once he showed up, everyone else pretty much backed off and let him take it down. Epically.)

I'm really hoping we get a chance to see Cloud do some real fighting at some point.

Cloud seems a little... OOC. Sorta. Like he's reverted to the personality he had near the beginning of the game, only less of a jerk. Though maybe enough time has past since AC for him to loosen up? I don't know. I do know that Cloud's excuse about 'heavy boxes' is weak in more ways than just his delivery. Seriously, someone who can use that sword (it's gotta be about 50 pounds), jump several stories straight up, slice chunks out of buildings, and take a bullet to the face and only get a scratch? Those would have to be *really* heavy boxes for him to have any sort of trouble with them.

I wonder who this new guy at Shinra is. And if he's connected to this Dark Tower crisis.

Interesting, I'm definitely curious to read Steven King's novel now. (I've heard so much about him, but I've never once read his work. Perhaps it's time to change that.) Though so far it seems that this is a crossover with everything *except* FFVII. We've got FFX, Kingdom Hearts, and Legend of Zelda so far.

Well, I'm not complaining. It's an interesting story. And I feel sorry for Roland as a kid. I wouldn't know what to do in that situation, either. It's a little strange seeing Link so talkative, but I suppose he'd have to talk in the games, we just never hear him.

I'll be reading more, though not at this moment. Gotta take a break!

So... the Medium is a Homestuck thing, right? Or is that a Tron thing?

Universal doubles, huh? Hmm... I was wondering how you were going to pull that off - works nicely though. I'm enjoying the way the universes are colliding.

...I'm also eager to see how Fantasy!Cloud reacts to Kingdom!Tifa. xD And yes, I was QUITE happy to see that Sora made an appearance - I wasn't expecting it at all. :D

One thing about punctuation, though. Punctuation ALWAYS goes in the quotation marks, even if you're just quoting something else without dialog. That's my only complaint though. :3

"Am I a gunslinger now?" Awww, that was just ADORABLE!

Wooooow. Way to be useful, Alucard, not like we could have used your help back there. Hurr durr. And what's with the whole six hundred year thing? What an asshole. XD I guess that means you're writing him well, though.

"As you both know, the Tower is getting far worse, thanks to the King's magnificent plans! The Heroes are locked away in agul siento while the Heartless devour their worlds. With the lifeforce of the worlds gone and nothing to power the beams, the Tower will fall."

So now it all comes into play. Gotta be perfectly honest with you, I did not see that coming. I wish I was far enough in the DT series to really know what the Tower IS. I mean, I have my theories, but I'm still not certain just yet.

Are we approaching Ludd soon? o:

...Link, I fucking love you. XDDDD

Again, don't know much about Alucard. So reviewing would be pretty much impossible. XD;;