Hahaa LOL! Faboulous!

I love your portrayals of Mello and this one-shot would have to be the most favourite of mine. I also enjoy your OC Layla.

It makes me wonder did you name your OC because of the Eric Clapton song, or was that just a coincidence?

The ending was classic :D made me laugh.

Haha now how did I see that coming? :)

The end..xDD Oh my god! xD I also thought that they always had condoms..xD Awesome idea, I loved it..xD And all their jokes and Mello, the control-freak..Great!

("Warily, he handed her the black rubber band, fully prepared to beat her senseless if she tried anything funny."..xD Thats so fitting..)

Very funny story! Had me laughing, which is impressive considering I read this upon waking without my first cup of coffee in me yet.

I love how you made him playful and pervy like a normal young male.

I do admire the fact that you have condom use in your stories, a good way to enforce safe sex while telling a story! That said, my own boyfriend and I have been there, only we were tearing apart the dresser drawers looking in hope for perhaps a condom that was misplaced. lol

eventualy I sign in to leave you an actual review. Too lazy.

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No way! You mean to tell me that they'd had a condom around all this time?

...Eh-heheh. Well, at least they're well-stocked, now. They're gonna need it.

Wonder what kind of "pregnancy scares" they've had in the past? Still, it's like Mello to want to take charge, even in bed. CX

You even had Eric Clapton mentioned here! "Layla" is one of his best songs, I think.

You have no idea how touched I am, right now, Ivy. Thank you so much for the dedications! Your portrayal of Erin was excellent, too! I'm particularly intrigued in the little detail where Layla thinks she sounds pretty. I personally would imagine Erin's voice to be a little loud and nasally, and she certainly doesn't sound pretty when she gets frustrated. XP

Still, beauty is really in the eye of the beholder. Or ear, in this case. Also, seeing her in this setting (Los Angeles, I assume?) makes me wonder what direction her life would've taken, had she never met L and gotten tangled up in the Kira case.

Anyway, a few spelling errors aside (you wrote, for example, "isle" when you meant "aisle"), great job! And thank you!