more plz!

YOU MUST UPDATE THIS NARRATIVE, DAMN YOU!
I've never read an Alien/Predator story so realistic! It was an interesting concept where he gives in to passion, probably from being tired and beaten, and now that he's refreshed and more aware, he's like, "What the hell did I just do?"
I implore you! Please update more of this! I really like this plot so far, and I have no constructive criticism to give! It pulled me in that much, so far. I know this hasn't been updated in a while, but I hope you haven't abandoned it!
I'm faving AND following this!

I wish you would continue this your one of the few who actually made a male human x female predator pairing fanfic.

After reading this for the fourth time I realized that you keep using mandibles as something the female is wearing. Where as mandibles are really a part of their mouth. Which confuses me because you keep referring to them as being apart of her clothing/or related to her chest area. XD LoL

Amazing! Seriously! you have a gift for writing :)

I hope you didn't give up on this story because I really like it. The pairing is very unusual, and I like originality. So please, can you take some time to write more chapters?

Thank you

PS: I read your author's presentation, and I can totally relate to what you are feeling since a cousin of mine has the same symdrome. As you mentioned, there are good sides of this disorder, and i'm sure your high-standard writing is only one of them!

Good luck for the future!

PS2: I'm french, so I hope you will forgive me for any grammar mistakes :)

Dude this is awesome just what I'd expect from someone as original as you can't wait for the next update :3

Dude, this is freakin awesome. Don't stop the story.

Can't help but pity Dahdtoudi, and her life up to this point. I hope we get to learn more about her past and just how much she's been through and just how young she actually is. I hope she finds some kind of happiness for herself, she seems like she's in some kind of eternal sadness. Poor girl!

Great writing style you've got here, can't wait to read more!

This story is such a reversal! Every story I read is yautja male and human female, but this story provides us with a welcome change! Good for you, coming up with a different take to the Predator franchise! I'm enjoying this story greatly!

Fascinating and original. However, I find your sentences very choppy and tough to read, they lack flow. I don't know how else to describe it to you.

Please update soon! I love this!

Interesting! I liked it) Now he must learn her that sex not only thing in relationships

Okay, finally I was able to read the whole thing, sorry it's taken so long. _; (It's me, btw, Fiji-Fujii. xD)

Like I already told you, I think it's a very interesting concept. The only thing that kinda disturbed me a little was the fact that you apparently took my Ruri par for par from the concept picture I posted on dA. _ I though you would create your original female Predator for this story.

But anyway - the sudden sex scene surprised me a little. xDDD I didn't expect any of that so soon.

But it's great still. ;3

(Sorry if my review was sucky, I'm more used to reviewing artworks, not literature. xD)

Great story and I love the Male Human and Female Predator pairings. This is a great story that needs to be continued.

Awwww! So touching. I pretty tired with male-Pred\fem-Human fics, glad to see reversed version. Especially good, not-gore relationship. Well, maybe if HUMAN saved fem!Predator it would have been even more interesting))) But it just me - I love savior\rescued relatioships.

Please keep writing!