great but senri doesn’t work as an abuser or he’s ooc, unless it’s Fido possessing his body.
Senri’s personality is too... docile to be a abuser

Stupid akatsuki

please please update "i know i shouldn't beg but i have to i really want to see this story finished"

OMG (bows to the floor) i can believe it i finally found it a abuse fic with rima and shiki i love is so i'm not the only one who thinks there relationship can go both ways thanks so much for writing this

When r u going to fucking update this it had better be soon or i will find you...sorry i just really like this storry

this one was a bit confuseing

please continue i love it and i dont know why you havent updated but please do

auuuuu

c'mon update soon DX

I agree with them... please update soon!

you've made an interestin plot!

poor rima :(

i hope rima get her happines XD

yoroshiku, atashi wa Shicchi desu. I love ur fic. xD

update soon, i cant wait so long

i do like0 this story a lot, but i must add

instead of saying shiki has a lot of "Senri" in him u would say "shiki" because shiki is his last name senri is his first, they r just put in reverse and takuma and rima r the only ones who call him senri because they r closest to him.

but i live the story cant wait for another update

Good:

1) I like the plot of the story, it seems very interesting, and in a weird way it kinda fits the characters.

2) Even though the characters are a bit OOC I think that it still fits the story well.

Bad:

1) I know this is a pain but you should try to make your chapters a little longer at around may be 3000 words.(if you write your story first on paper, know that a full notebook page is about half a page in microsoft word)

2) You should try to use more vivid vocabulary and try to add more details.

But in short I like this story, update soon and have a nice day :)