LOL this is so cute. I would quote, but that would take too long because there were too many one-liners I liked. The dialogue was very in-character and I could just imagine Tony's horrified expression when the tail came off.

Nice job! Thanks for writing!

-Zay

Funny and yet very telling. I have a feeling her ski vacation wasn't a romantic trip.

LOL poor Tony

I have to agree with some of the reviews that's been given.. there is more to this story :-)

Please continue with this..

Definitely gross, but a nice moment in the end. Tony really needs to learn how to keep his mouth shut though. ;-)

Euu! Euu! Euu! (Okay, I almost left the theatre during the apartment clean up scene in "Enchanted.)

Loved the story. Hated the rat, but loved the story.

Ick,ugh,I swear I could smell that rat...

Lovely domestic affair friendshippy type story...:)

As someone who recently had to sniff out a dead mouse in the closet at work, I could really appreciate this story. Thanks for once again making me laugh.

As "domestic" a scene this was, for some reason it left me all fuzzy. (Which is not entirely the appropriate reaction to the poor rat, I know, but hey. :D )

And yet... For some reason this feels unfinished. Can't put my finger on it, but at the end I sat there thinking "Wait, what? Did we run out of time?"

So, I know you do a loooot of one-shots. But this one sort of demands a follow-up, IMO. Jus' sayin'... ;)

Aww no that can't be it! There's still more to come..you have to tell us what happens at the hotel! Most one-shots are good just as one-shots but this...this isn't finished! Two-shot pwease? :D

Cute and funny lol. Nice job!

Good story!

Nice story loved the humor of it all 'SuperBen' best idea/ name EVER!

Nice one

LOL. This was totally hilarious! Personal experience, perhaps?

Working from an extreamly difficult premis you have made something rather sweet!