Lol hey for your first one shot I thought it was pretty good! It started off a little random.. but the sex was really hot! And I loved that there were a few cute moments in there too & that it wasn't all just a random fuck to them lol :D

Lol, he forgot to lock the door, now I wonder how the rest of the crew reacted to finding them, Robin probably already knew that they liked each other, she always does XD

"such a slutty face"
hahaha I wanna see it too! XD

Loved this ending soo much hahahaha *wipes away a tear*! Great fic!

I know I've read this before but I had to read it again! I love it so much! haha Oh Zoro, be sure to take care of your cook XP

Chase: *Squee* I like this one too~ 3

Vin: You deffinately need to write more of these lol

Eheeee It was so good! I love the way you write! I don't think you could have made this story any better... You set scenes and description really well, you still to characteristics and emotion well and your story flows well. (:

I actually also liked how you ended the story. I find that when reading, a lot of people just make some short little cheesy bit at the bottom like 'and then they ran to the sunset yaaay' (but not quite that...) -I hope you understand what I mean- but anyway I think you gave a really nice sense of closure at the end and it definitely fit very well with the rest of your story.

I look forward to reading more from you :3

~~Christine

/sidenote.

I also wanted to thank you greatly for your comments on my stories. When I read them I did some spazzy face thing and couldn't stop smiling at the webpage. So thank you very much, your comments actually made me want to stop being lazy and write some more o3o

The last line is golden. ROFL. Great one! It's good and the ending is just sweet. I love it.

Woah, this was so hot and hilarious at the end XD I liked how you've written the sex sceen~ *drool* If you accept an advise from me, next time when you write ZoSan, try Sanji's character make a little more manly and not so shyly. I think Sanji a lot more sexier when he is in control and needy, but still he's on the bottom. In my sight of view Zoro and Sanji are the same level in a relationship, just Sanji enjoys do the submission thing for Zoro XD And that's the hottest thing in the world

So I very loved your fic, hope you'll write more ZoSan I also hope that you didn't take my comment as a harsh one.

I added your story and you to my favs, so please write more, I'll definietly read all of them.

Byebye~

This is the hottest thing ever! I can't believe I haven't read this before!

Humorous, sexy and cute!

Good times! I liked this and a little more proof reading and this could have been great. Nice work.

a-haha, just one sec before reading the last sentence, I thought, "yeah, and then they got found by the others."

This is hot stuff, and your style of writing is really good. Although perhaps you should let the Word correction programme have a look over it, you have some minor typos in it ;-) But that's all I have to criticise. Good job.

Hahahaha!

Yay! Smut!

Yay! Nakedness!

Yay! Forgetfulness and unlocked doors.

Overall I'd give this a two thumbs up and interwebs hug.

Good job!