Reviews for Forbidden Alliance |
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GalvanizedDesire chapter 12 . 4/29/2019 Buahahaha chicks really are bit volatile aren't they? Carnivorous glow fish huh? I could set those up in a moat around my house |
GalvanizedDesire chapter 11 . 4/29/2019 So. He's - They're in hiding? I mean, hiding at a whorehouse is smart. But is Auran some sort of undercover guard or so the other really not know who he is? WHY are they hiding? Dude. Wat. |
GalvanizedDesire chapter 3 . 4/28/2019 Several aspects of this are new pleasantly new to me and I applaud you. Having it be taboo for males and females to interact is interesting as I'm used to a sort of chick run environment. Isn't that called a matriarch? I don't know but I like it. Huunans is new too, everyone always says ooman. I love how the one that has little interest is the one chosen to do the dirty deed, poor Auran. |
GalvanizedDesire chapter 1 . 4/28/2019 Dude I'm only halfway through this chapter but you have just now become frickin GOALS in terms of background explanation. Not gonna lie, it took me three mentions before I realized Tyler was her name and not a person sitting next to her, my bad. I'm reading this instead of doing a presentation but that's okay 'cause I like this more. So, uh, be prepared for my bombardment? In a good way I swear! |
monay9e chapter 40 . 2/19/2019 Will there be a sequel? |
monay9e chapter 39 . 2/19/2019 I loved this story. |
Guest chapter 4 . 7/22/2016 This author is very talented. Although English is not her first language, she does well to paint the picture and draw me in. I will be reading on for sure. David |
Firestar001 chapter 1 . 4/22/2015 So is this Vasquez related to Pvt Vasquez from "Aliens"? |
1WhoLoves2ReadAlot chapter 40 . 8/30/2014 Great story! Love it |
AAEdmonds chapter 40 . 1/27/2014 Forbidden Alliance was such a damn good story, I had to go back and re-read it. Now it feels like I'm starving for more on the lives of Zeyin, Ahandra, Auren, the future of the Darkblades! I am crossing my fingers you eventually figure out an ending to a sequel, it will be glorious! |
jrmf chapter 40 . 11/21/2013 AWESOME STORY! I couldn't get away! Please keep on writing AVP stories. I love it! |
brascar chapter 40 . 9/11/2013 i would like to see a part two to this :) |
Honored Countess chapter 11 . 8/11/2013 Awww. I was really hoping to actually see them together. But at least he saved her. |
Honored Countess chapter 10 . 8/11/2013 Well well. I was hoping for a bit more with Tyler in this, but I see the plot thickens. Onward! |
Honored Countess chapter 9 . 8/11/2013 I really like where this story was going. A bit of a different take into what I've seen of the yautja world, but I like it. The idea of assassins is intriguing. But more, how they changed a human. You've snagged me. Well done. :3 |