Nice story. Good luck with your future stories.

Great.

Mmm... sexy and sweet!

love that love that.. i totally ship Elf and Eva 3

I completely agree that this pairing is often overlooked! This look into Evergreen's mind was great and they were both so in-character that nothing felt forced at all. Great job, I sincerely enjoyed it!

This is my new favorite ElfmanxEvergreen fanfic! Congratulations for writing so well. I did not notice any spelling or grammar mistakes if you freak out about those as much as I do. :)

Elfever is so adorable! And this is so cute!:3
Really good work!:)

This is really well done.

i know right...they're just as suuuuuuupeer cute as any of the other couples out there...

I liked this a lot! (: Cheers for ElfEver!

aw that was so cute! I like this couple more than I thought I would and you wrote them very well, I like how Evergreen is so irritated by the feelings she can't control but is still so tender and understanding of Elfman, especially that little reference to Lisanna's 'death'. A nice sweet look at Evergreen's side in their relationship, thanks so much for writing. this couple needs more love :)

I'm a huge Elfman X evergreen fan! And this story was super cute 3
Yeah sadly there isn't that much of stories for the pair :(
I think because the anime shows the development of their relationship in the most beautiful way possible. And I love it X)

that was super cute! I completely agree- this pairing really needs more love! Somehow, they are so perfect together!

SO TRUE! We need more ElfmanXEvergreen! :D (Though i am perfectly content with more Jerza, NaLu, and Gruvia as well... :D)

Freaking adorable. Just rip my heart out, won't you?