Reviews for Trying to Fly
JustAnotherNormalDemigod chapter 1 . 5/11/2013
Cool. :)
TrueBeliever831 chapter 3 . 8/19/2012
Another Amaizng one.
TrueBeliever831 chapter 2 . 8/19/2012
You are amazing at these
TrueBeliever831 chapter 1 . 8/19/2012
Wow, this was absolutely amazing I loved it so much. I never read next gen but this was perfect, really.
stars shine out chapter 3 . 4/27/2012
That was a seriously awesome poem. Excellent job!
stars shine out chapter 2 . 4/27/2012
Wow again. You are a magnificent freeverse writer
stars shine out chapter 1 . 4/27/2012
awwww! You've practically got me in tears! that was absolutly magnificent!
shimmeringbubbles chapter 3 . 9/7/2011
wow. Great free verse! Love your style. I think my favourite chapter is Race against the Clock - it's a bit more fast paced than the others... overall really good :)
Lillith Aurora chapter 3 . 5/31/2011
Wow, I really like these. Update soon!
Lillith Aurora chapter 3 . 5/31/2011
Wow, I really like these. Update soon!
arrowslipstick chapter 3 . 3/21/2011
I love these! :D
Nchinatsu chapter 3 . 2/28/2011
Brava! What lovely poetry. I can see Victoire as a total fox.
samira parsa chapter 3 . 1/20/2011
great!
samira parsa chapter 2 . 1/16/2011
ooh well done! i can't wait for more!
Rising From The Flames chapter 2 . 1/16/2011
I liked it a lot! Although the I was a little confused when you switched from using spider imagery to castle/queen imagery and back. Great job though! :)