me crackling...hmm is this before they know each other as superman and batman or are they normal hear ooo I so must know O.O HEHEHE XD

So romantic and such wonderful writing.

OH my gosh, that's as such a cute kiss!

just what i was looking for... heh

Nawwwwwww that was so sweet XD XD loved it!

Adorable :3
Though I would have liked it better if you had mentioned Clark's powers. I don't know, I always like such reminders :))

I LOVE IT! Especially how you kept them both so in character. Bruce just acting the part of the playboy. And Clark just being so Clark it's so fluffy! xD

Lovely. I almost started to get teary eyed there for a moment when Bruce inches up to Clark and says "...It's Tradition...". Clark says "...Yes,...Tradition...". It's very touching, and really beautiful. Yes, a tear or two or three came out. The start of the kissing, and the evolving of the kissing sent chills up my spine. It's remarkably written, I could actually visualize it in my mind's eye. It kinda turned me on a little. I love these two guys. I can hardly find decent fics. Just a little too many hogwashed stories, limpid, time consuming, wishy-washy, vapid weak assed, going nowhere stories. Or ones with the characters not being true-to-form, or them being Twisto-Whacko, Sicko-Wrong-O. This story was dead-on, spot-on, the characterizations were heartfelt, normalized, and realistically plausible. I believed in them. Near the end when they get separated, I knew Bruce would find him. It's not like Bruce can't accomplish something he's determined to find, with all of the resources and intelligence available to him. When he did surprisingly find him, I was happy I had the inkling before the fact. I'm all fuzzy-wuzzy inside now. Thanks for sharing. Bless you whoever you are.

:D you call that 'out of practice' ;p That was great! You gave voice to Clark's thoughts and feelings in a way fitting the character, and Bruce was as multi-face red as ever :) I'd love to read a sequel where they meet as altéré his and Clark recognizes his voice despite the change in timber because he heard it in bed before ;p not to mention his smell, his heartbeat and his eyes :)
Please?
Anyway, superb work! You did more than just 'did' it :)
Thanks for sharing!

I don't know what you were talking about...this fan-fic was awesome, everything was cute and full with lust! I loved it, and if you said that this wasn't your A-game, I can't imagine how you'd write even better...totally the fluff I was looking for!
PEACE!

Aw! I thought that the ending was adorable!X3

Love it.

Adorable fluff. :3

Adorable! i love it! Have you thought of doing a sequel?
Love Peace and Rock always,
Rockerbabe

Arg, I wish this actually happened. I love this so much! :D