This I like. It's predictable, but good.

Why the FUCK is Robin talking like that?

I knew from the beginning who whe was talking with -.-;

Not that hard, really.

I didn't like this chapter :S

It's insulting towards Robin's awesome, cool attitude. Please explain to me why you wrote her talking like that.

Oh. I like this. I really do.

Just small little thingies that annoyed me:

1) Second paragraph, last sentence, there should be a 'than' instead of a 'then'.

2) Fifth paragraph, last sentence, you forgot the word 'get' in "I didn't (get) it then"

And a few grammar mistakes that didn't really boter me that much.

Don't see me as a Grammar Nazi or anything, I'm just saying.

I'm glad you wrote Coby. He's awesome x3

That is a very good start, if I may say so.

Very true, too.

Juz wondering.. but it is spelling errors? or on purpose..? though there isn't any reason for Robin to be speaking like that..