This is a good story, thanks. I'm looking forward to seeing some Merlin instead of just Emrys. Thanks!

No, don't do this. Will this have a happy ending. Please have a happy ending. It's too adorable.

Hello there :)

I just wanted to congratulate you on the work well done - slash is really not my thing, but the idea is grand! This is different and thrilling and I really couldn't stop reading until I got to the very end. Thank you for the ride - most wonderful. Words won't do justice for your imagination!

Keep creating!

I like that it's Arthur who saves Merlin when the sorcerers fail to do so. Also, I don't know if any of your reviewers have called attention to this (I refuse to read through all 341 reviews to find out), but I wanted to mention a minor grammatical point. When a word is merely plural like sorcerers or beds, you do not need an apostrophe.

This chapter nicely illustrates Arthur's indomitable will.

Hey there !
I began your story quite a time ago, and I like it but I was busy so I had to read like one chapter a day so well I just finished it tonight.
I really liked it, it's a good idea to make Merlin the savior of sorcellers and all, and I had fun reading the meeting between him and Arthur, and the moment they became closer.
Yet, I was a little bit disappointed by the very end of your story, like the two last chapters.
But I LOVED the all Underworld stuff. That was great.

Well, I liked your story (that's why I'm reviewing) and I hope your wrote other fiction to read them too :)

See you,

Alice (forgive the mistakes I made, I'm French)

And AGAIN I find your story AMAZING! OMG I read TWO of yours and maybe three soon..in one day ]..And it's not like I haven't read many fanfics..I've read 385 that I have liked and many more that I didn't like or never finished! So I definitely know when a books good ] Thanks for the read! Here's to hoping for many more!

Noooo! Im so sad this is over!

Wasup!

I am SO TIRED of authors wasting readers time by making or using powerful characters and then making them stupid and worthless.

this chapter had me tearing up really emotional

Nope. Still mindfucked. You should label this with a warning not to read it all inone sitting. BwcauseI did and i may well be in shock. My mental capabilities have overloaded.
Seriously.

This story... i am thoroughly mindfucked and I am still not sure if it is ina good way or a bad way...

One of the most interesting Merlin stories on this site :D

Please, fix your run-on sentences.