Re-read all this wonderful story and wondering a bit - will it be finished? I really fo hope so - becose among others, your stories are ones of the best ones. And i do love Heinlein a lot for sure... )

Anyway - thank you for sharing this story with us. it is truly awesome and interesting.
(Got drown in it till 4 am, was not able to get out of it)))

I have read this story no less then three times and I love it more each time. I hope real life is going well and you consider continuing this story at some point.

Dude, what have you got against Slytherins?

Often the purpose of fanfiction is to allow people to continue to explore their favorite worlds and spend more time with their favorite characters, beyond the bounds of canon. Needless to say, fanfic readers are often disinterested in extraneous characters and locations. This is why I am surprised that I like Eyeful, Gatalas, the Sarmatians, etc. so freaking much. I am totally caught up in this world of horses, dragons, alternate dimensions, and magi-science that you've created. Although I do treasure the cameos of my favorite dragon bros, I'm totally content with them being just that: cameos. Your world here and its characters are more than strong enough to stand on their own, and I applaud that. You would probably do quite well writing original novels. This work is beyond excellent. I hope it is continued someday.

The akhal tekes actually seem a lot prettier to me. Their coats are magnificent, so shiny! I prefer their glow to the Arabian matte fur color. Both are quite pretty - the Akhal teke has lots of straight lines, coming across as serious and practical in shape, alike to block-print writing. Arabians have many curves which add some ornamentation, giving them a luxuriously shapely silhouette, like formal loopy cursive writing.

This is a fantastic story, and I personally LOVE IT! I am very excited for the next chapter, and I only ask it come without hardship on your part. Staying tuned!

Uh, 3 years. I know you didn't die soooo... ?

Chapter 14
A haah . So ...The known Red Death-4 , 6 eyes -EL DE GIGANTE which are the same giant evil demonic thing made it , or defeated the next provably and with that army they done it . But how . Or it was only 1 .
And the sourse of those things I would like to know isit closed .
And the worries of the scrill ,Red Death children or Screaming Red Death muts or something worse .
And in future who was that misterious Gobber and Hicup . Are they from other realm . Or are they .

Just think of it .

This is the potential for update this or the related story whatever you want just tell me what did you do . Did you chose to update 1 of the connected story and which one you chose . when you can and havve time to do it .

Aha , akinake is something longer than dager like short sword , lither than gladius provably for fast mobile steady attacks .

Chapter 5

And I am glad that the little dragon finally trusts a little more to Gatalas and her friend which was Eyefull .

What a sad find and a sad death, at least they died with their partners at their side :(

I am just completely blown away by the amount of knowledge you have incorporated into Ravenwing's story of becoming a partner and how a herd functions- horses aren't often depicted right in stories (and movies for that matter) with how they would naturally behave, but you either live or have lived with horses for a very substantial amount of time, or you have done the mother of all research jobs and background checks! Your knowledge really shows (in all the cultural and historical trends too) and just goes to make this story all that more incredible- if I could buy a printed version of this I would have it proudly displayed in my bookshelf!

Hahaha I laughed so hard at Gatalas's little acting skit, as I am a huge supporter of 'bromance' and honestly don't see why pretty much every friendship ever written inevitably gets shipped by some people, ah well, different interests I suppose.
At this point I am still very skeptical of the priests/blacksmiths and their DNA messing and injections and whatnot, though I guess in the end it is done kindly and for a better life for everyone so I will withhold my judgements for now...

Also this is seriously doing my head in on how this doesn't have more favorites/reviews- this is practically an original story! And with so much background research done I truly feel immersed in this culture- I really hope you write and publish (as in get books printed) some of your own original stories in future (if you haven't already) because you are a truly incredible writer!

Question...Is Lux some sort of Night Fury subspecies? He appears to be so on the cover-art, and I just saw HTTYD2...

Good lord you must be psychic! How'd you know about Toothless's luminescent stripe?!

Hmm... Could Lux's species be related to the flightmare? That just looks like too much of a similarity to me.
P.S. If you don't know what a flightmare is, check out the TV series for HtTYD, called Dragons: Riders of Berk.
P.P.S. Are you going to give certain episodes of the TV series a Heinlein twist?
P.P.P.S. Are you going to give HtTYD2 a Heinlein twist? (after it comes out, of course! I'm not that stupid!)
P.P.P.P.S. Sorry for all of the P's in the P.S's!

Awesome! Can't wait for the update :D

oh no it's ended that was fantastic is there going to be anymore chapters )