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   Luzith chapter 18 . 7/30 This is magnificent! I love the idea of a smart, beautiful little girl born to Sha're and Daniel! The world building for the planet of Thoth was also very well done. Loved it all! |
| Lina03 chapter 18 . 7/4/2014 Awesome, just awesome ) |
| Raven Marcus chapter 18 . 10/19/2012 cool! |
| bec chapter 18 . 10/15/2012 Great story. Now we need a story about Daniel introducing Dan 'e to Earth and how they cope with being a new family. You could write a great story. Keep up the great writing. |
| fighttowin1 chapter 18 . 7/26/2012 Aww...such a perfect ending to such a great story! Thank you for sharing it with us! :-) |
| fighttowin1 chapter 17 . 7/26/2012 Suspenseful, perfectly written couple of chapters! I just now realized that I've missed reviewing a few chapters! That happens sometimes when I'm reading something that is intense...I just get caught up in the story! Curious to see whether the chip in Daniel will be set off when he tries to leave the planet. Hmmm...reading on to find out! |
| fighttowin1 chapter 10 . 7/26/2012 Uh Oh! Well, I guess it will depend on who was in the shadows as to how much trouble this is going to be. Still enjoying it! |
| fighttowin1 chapter 9 . 7/26/2012 Loved this line: Daniel chuckled. I said, "Warning! You have just entered a mine field." Isn't that the truth… Very nicely done! I can see that Mal'rac is going to be a problem. Hmmm...so Daniel is being set up to be in a nice place to orchastrate the rebellion and an escape...interestingly though...it could also be set up to help the rest of SG-1 should they happen to be captured instead of doing the rescuing. Looking forward to reading more. :-) |
| fighttowin1 chapter 8 . 7/26/2012 At least the branding was done in a location that can be covered up easily or removed later. ;-) |
| fighttowin1 chapter 7 . 7/26/2012 Sweet! Enjoying this excellently written story! |
| fighttowin1 chapter 2 . 7/26/2012 Nicely written! Love the details! Maybe Carter will figure out that the dhd holds previous addresses in the buffer? If not though...we know that Daniel is a 'spacemonkey' and with the experience he has, I'm sure that he has a great chance of getting out somehow on his own. heehee...if you can't tell, I'm enjoying this story! |
| fighttowin1 chapter 1 . 7/26/2012 WOW! I'm enjoying this nicely written story! You have the characters down really well, and it is very enjoyable to read. Looks like Daniel is in a situation again, the look that the Jaffa gave him is curious though...I'm looking forward to reading more. ;-) Thank you for the story! Oh..and my favorite part in this chapter would be the banter between the team in the beginning of the chapter. |
| B00kw0rm92 chapter 18 . 9/14/2011 This was so wonderful! I wish you would write a sequel about Daniel's life now that he has his daughter. |
| Dr. Daniel Jackson Lover chapter 10 . 8/4/2011 Awww. Chapter 12 is so emotional. I cried...again. |
| Dr. Daniel Jackson Lover chapter 6 . 8/4/2011 :o(! SO SAD! I love this story! |
