Dude make the chapters longers and try to make chapters please and make rqaven when they fught levous with half of her might alone

This story is way past awesome. U really need to update this

Nice job again the fights were good and I am impress at how well they are doing. I wonder what happened on starfire's homeworld. Update when you can please.

You probably wont like what I'm about to say since most writers on fanfiction tend to hate those who tell the truth but I couldn't help but noticing that your story...well I'm not sure what the plot is any more and I cant help but to think that your story is draging out too long, truthfully speaking I'm begining to get a little bit put down with the fact that to me it looks like the story isnt going any where (sure there is Raven getting to know and coexist with her emotions and your character still without a heart but what else), ofcourse you might just be using this as a certain aspect of your writing style and this effect that your story has on me might be intended (though I doubt it), then I'll probably be just sprouting nonsense to you, yet personally I believe that if you maybe added a bit of a reminder about the evil antagonist in your characters realm (which I have to admit was rather interesting) just to bring us back to the fact that your character was running away from something, which at the begining of the story I was pretty sure that this was part of the major plot of the whole of the story, though now all I see is the regular teen titans villains and your story is starting to look like another titan episode off the t.v., well I dont know if I explained myself well since no matter how many times I read this review over it sounds all jumbled up but I hope you dont get mad, and I would hope you understand that you are a great writer but you are starting to lag a little

-EVA -

Hehehe nice gift from raven's emotions very funny. I like also the gifts lev and everyone got each other. The cookbook one is my favorite. Maybe raven can finally learn how to cook properly...or not. A fight in the next chapter huh? Sounds good update when you can please.

Not bad even though it isn't christmas or near december its still good. I also like the ending by what lust said...oh boy what could she have up her sleeve. Update when you can please.

Your doing fine and I like the way you ended the chapter. Slade wants revenge I think he shouldn't but then again he's not the kind to let these things go. Update when you can please.

Yay slade is beaten, lev saved raven, and star nearly killed him with her hug. Like the background on the demons and how lev tortured slade good job. Update when you can please.

Nice glad slade got his butt kicked but I want to see what lev will do next...please update soon I want to know what lev does next.

cool story

I really really hope Lev kicks slade ass and rip his head off from his body. Update when you can please.

Good story. Interesting cliffy. Keep it up.

Nice chapter I like what happened with happy hugging lev but now I hope they save raven from slade. Update when you can please.

Its been a loooong time since i read this chapter and no worries about you taking long. I think you should let Lust have Lev, it might happen eventually so might as well let it happen now so she can get it out of her system. Update when you can plase.

Excellent story,I greatly enjoyed reading it, and can hardly wait for the next chapter.