I love stories like this. Because it would take time for Ryou and Marik to get used to it sense they have been possesed sense they were what? 8-9 years old? Yugi only had pharaoh for a few months? Anyway nice work.

This. Was. So. CUTE! I always think that it was a little unfair that we never really saw these two after their yams were gone. Yugi gets attention, but Ryou and Marik kind of fade into the background.

Anyways, I'll stop ranting and get to the review. Both Ryou and Marik were written just as I would write them, so I'll give you credit there. Overall... Adorable. Couldn't have done it better myself.

Hehe, if you want me to run this through with red ink, I COULD try to criticize, but... I really did like this. xD I especially like the bit about Marik's explanation for why he came back to Domino (makes so much sense! And I really think it's in character! 3)... and of course the "two halves make a whole" thing. No wonder why they bonded~ :D

Great job!