I love this! I had a feeling Jess was preggers

You should keep writing!

Well that was a big jump! 6 years old to a 16 year old! And from "My Sammy" to "payback's a bitch". They sure do grow up fast. ;)

Poor Cassie. :/
Personally I wouldn't think there was anything pervy about this. She's his 6 year old sister. When you love someone like that you'd do anything to help them.

Woah... Harsh words for a 4 year old at the end there! I haven't reviewed anything yet because I was carried away reading. Great story telling. If I'm honest the grammar could use a tiny bit of work here and there but it's great! Keep up the good work. :)

Great chapter! Please update more :)

Well, short IS better than nothing! I agree with Lilly, I would be so mad at Dean AND Sam.

I know it is on hiatus but don't give up on your story its great!

Please update soon! Love this and I really want to know what happens next!

upload soon! :)

im so sad to see jess go and for lilly to have just been put through so much pain and suffering! i wonder if she is going to tell sam? and how long it takes her to let dean off the hook

This is a good story , please update . I'm dying to know what happens :)

loved the chapter! but what a cliffy! im still mad at sammy though for making dean leave lilly with jess!

Hmmmm...not sure if this time change is going to work. I just don't see Sam just joining them if 12 years have passed without regular contact, especially if he is married and probably has a career to boot. I just don't see YED waiting that long for Sammy. Please don't make Lilly a Mary Sue, there is a tendency here for that if you are not careful. A real turn off.

I'll read it some more and see if this will work.

I didn't ever get the vibe that Dean was being a perv, just a concerned father type helping his little girl. Oh, but a six year old wouldn't way 30 pounds. She'd be starved looking if she did. Even if she is small for her age she'd still way a lot more than 30 (a two year old could way that much, maybe). I'm am really enjoying your story and hope you don't mind some minor criticism. Also in the General POV you wrote: General POV

He leaned her up against his shoulder and he grabbed a few things for her, like some books, some colour pages, and her blankie. I wrapped her up in a small twin comforter because she was only wearing her thin nightgown...

Anyhow, you have "I wrapped her up..." I assume "I" is Dean? Be careful with mixing up POV's. It is confusing. There are some minor spelling mistakes that could just be typos. Have you thought about getting a Beta? They will help find these kind of mistakes and suggest changes if need be. They are a great resource and all the really good writers here use them!

Anyhow...Geez, who knew that Cassie would be such an imbecile with children? I guess this will derail the romance and change canon! I hope Lilly is feeling better soon. She has the best Dad in Dean. Looking forward to the next chapter. And thanks for not making her into a Mary Sue.