Can hardly believe the last time I read this was in 2014, and that it's still going!
Keep up the wild ride!

Poor Martel.

YAS. We got a name!

Amazing!

I love this story so much! Greed’s my favorite character from FMA and I’m happy that this doc is centered on him and the Devil’s Nest gang. Your writing style is great to read too.

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The ‘other half’ seems interesting. And, ha, Ridi is now officially a wanted criminal! I suspect that will make things inconvenient; especially if she does decide at any point to attempt to use her knowledge save anyone (say maybe, Hughes?) other than the Devil’s Nest crew (although I don’t see her having much luck sneaking away!). Getting anyone in the Military to listen to her now will be rather challenging! At least some of them would probably consider capturing the ‘dangerous criminal’ a prize if they encountered her. Including Mustang. So basically, Greed is right and without them she is pretty doomed. :P

Greed was great in this chapter and I enjoyed the dialogue (and teasing). Greed and Ridi getting all frustrated with each other was pretty entertaining! Suspect that there is going to be quite a bit more of that in the future for everyone, as Ridi tries to protect her secrets and Greed and Co. try to make sense of things. Greed is certainly not used to not getting what he wants. I will also be very curious to see what direction the group’s next move might be after the safehouse. Thanks for writing – looking forward to more!

Welcome back! So happy that you are planning on continuing this story! Glad that Dolcetto moved to help her during the train crash, and I liked the inadvertent crossover with Scar’s actions in this timeline. Although once again, it seems that despite her efforts to argue her theory about Scar was a logical possibility, Ridi may have only managed to raise their suspicions further. I think you are doing a really good job with everyone’s characterisations.

Thank for writing! I love the story, I kind of thought I wouldn't get to see anymore, but I did! Thank you once again.

When will you post chapter 9 of wrong foot missed step don't mean to sound impatient but it's been almost a year since you last posted a chapter of wrong foot missed step

So Father is the arch-villain in this world rather then Dante. I rather like that; of the two, he is by far the more threatening. Dante wanted to sacrifice a city so she'd have enough Stone to continue her reign of body-snatching and starve off the flesh rot for a time. Small-time thinking compared to Father, on the other hand, wanting to sacrifice a country as part of his plans to end up consuming the *world*! Also, those zombie-cyclops-doll-things of his were kinda creepy. O_o I don't blame Ridi for being freaked out - its the kind of news that would make you consider getting the hell of Ametris! :) And now that Greed is aware that she knows exactly *who* he's talking about, but not why...

This was good. Slow, but good. I enjoyed the scene of the villains. The Old Man seems interesting.

Judging by Greed's reaction, its lucky for Ridi that the group seem to have assumed that the one that injured her was also the one who put her in the outfit, perhaps as some sort of 'message' or warning aimed at Greed. Interested to see how things develop from here!

Sorry for not getting to this sooner. Life is a bitch, at the moment. Just like Greed. Hehehar -shot-. The scene of Greed and the Chimera was well done. I enjoyed the section from Ridi's POV. It really helps get into her mind set and helps with the gravity of the situation. I honestly look forward to seeing how Ridi fairs, since she isn't really in any condition to be walking around. Iz good.

Whoops, by the way, that 'guest' review was from me, forgot to identify myself. :)