I don't know if you still check the reviews here but this story deserves it. This was so beautifully written! Edward's struggle between his conscience and his desires was on point. I really liked that, inspite of the "immorality" of their relationship, everything Edward said or did was respectful of Jacob. I loved the way you wrote them and their dynamics. They are the perfect match! Thank you for this incredible story!

Amazing ;)

Wow. I'm impressed. This story was alot better than I thought it'd be. Thank you for writing it.

Great story

God, this was absolutely perfect, words as art and that's absolute! You are very talented!

This was a very perplexing story, I positively enjoyed reading this. You are an astounding writer and I very much would love reading some more of your works. Simply astonishing, with skills like these, you could become a flourishing author. I do hope I can become such a staggering writer as yourself one day!

Hi, I don't know if you still check reviews but I couldn't stop my self from writte.
Oh god it's just that I haven't fell the need to leave a review in to much time.
I love it, I couldnt believe that it was just a one-shot but it wasn't just a one-shot it was a story, ok I have to calm breath.
It's a wonderful work and I just wanted to thank you, this is one of that 50 fics that you read and think woo this is a story not a fic.
Sorry for the lack of sense I'm not that good at writ in English that and when I get exited I don't make any sense at all.
I'm going to continue reading your work.

awe

Wow, I'm quite speechless. That was absolutely incredible. You write so beautifully, the story and the characterizations were perfect. The whole idea of the professor/student relationship is rarely done nicely with Edward and Jacob, in fact I don't think I've ever come across another story like yours that was so well written. You have such a nice flow with your words, it's not rushed or dragged out, it's just perfect.

Edwards personality was right on, his manner of speech and career choice for his character. So good. And jacob, really, you are one of the first people I know of that actually made him intelligent but still himself. Of course he wasn't 100% Jacob, but he still had those little qualities about him from the actual books that just made him spark well in your story. Over all, I'm so happy that I came across this. I really hope you continue writing because you definitely have a gift for it. I was sucked right into this from the first line to the very last word.

Thank you so so much for writing this, it must have taken you a long time and I really appreciate you sharing it with us. It deserves more reveiws. Ah, thank you again.

I really loved this

awesome story

That was really good. I was having trouble understanding why tears would escape me every third paragraph, but I eventually moved past that. It was a captivating and beautiful fic.

I particularly liked the fact that Aro was not the bad guy. As for the relationship, it sure didn't start out ideally, but it ended on a happy note and that is all I ask for. Not to mention that the journey from begining to end was magical.

Thank for all the hours and hard work you've put into this. Writing sure is hard, isn't it?

"Professor, we're artists of words and we don't entertain in pretenses."

"Some of the best artists do." I argued.

"Only those who choose to live in the worlds they create."

I keep a book of quotes and things that I love or that speak to me and those lines are definitely going in there. That was great as was the whole story. If you can't tell already, I've been going through all your stories and loving them all. You're a wonderful writer! Thanks for sharing!

Thought i reviewed this already, guess I didn't. Love this story

Wow! That was freaking fantastic! I just couldn't stop reading this. The amount of emotions and feelings you put in this... It was as if it was coming from personal experience or you're a very talented writer XDDDDD I love and adore your work very much! Continue writing or maybe make this one a two- shot instead of a one- shot (please please please please please please please please please please)