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I got kinda scared when Ash suddenly tried to break a vase over Gary's head o_o
That's some friend ya got there, Gary. Nice story, cute ending.

a super sexy love hate relationship！(_)

Unf. This was great!

That song is PERFECT! XDDD

You should've continued! XDDDD

Keep it up! 8DDDDD

Lol what is this angry sex?

Hey! Spike and Buffy! Well written, pretty amusing too.

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This was cute! :D

Talk about a love hate relationship :o ...that was...HOT. Loved it, I wish you could do a series of one shot stories all together and write them as different love stories, rated M lol that would be awesome _

You really need to do at least a second chapter to this... Love/Hate relationships are great, I enjoyed the Yaoi fight scenes, But I really wanted it to continue ._. Gary & Ash are my favorite slash pairing in Pokemon so seeing another chapter would be great, though I guess most times that doesn't happen... Either way It was good, I like the amount of detail used. I'm gonna add it my alerts just as a what if kinda deal, Again Good job with this one.

Uwaaah! I was really getting into it when it ended abruptly D: I demand Lemon!

Aw, damnit! XD Haha, shoot, just as it was getting good! 8D Not that the rest of it wasn't good, LOL, it's just I was indeed in the mood for some hot yaoi action :P Quite intense, I don't think I could write an action-fight scene, that's for sure :D Good work.

~Bexmar O

I love you.

So, so, SO very much.

u need to write what happens next u really do