| Reviews for Born to Die |
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   dots-fiction chapter 13 . 6/8 this whole chapter just explained my concerns with my comment on the last one lmfao i knew she was sheltered from the very first chapters but i still think it's a little off that she never WANTED more!? like ok, she loved her dad and wanted to be there for him but she's 20 years old and she never felt lonely? she never wanted to be around people her age? only recently she asked her dad to meet other people? this girl sounds a little bit like a martyr |
| dots-fiction chapter 12 . 6/8 i'm really liking this so far and please don't take this as hate or flames but i just gotta say it. the one thing im iffy about is how... pure... she is... like, she blushes at everything and sounds so virginal. at this point im willing to believe she's never even been kissed... at 20? i feel like so many fanfics have this "virgin falls in love with experienced bad boy" storylines and it's kind of annoying not to mention very unlikely in this day and age lol |
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/29 Love story plz update soon |
| Abbey Carolyn chapter 29 . 6/22/2019 Loved this fic, can’t wait for more Happy and Addison, really hope you come back and finish it soon x |
| IOwnAnxiety chapter 29 . 2/23/2019 Hiya! I found this story through a weird search and was instantly intrigued. I just read the whole thing in a couple of hours when I was supposed to be writing a paper. Only after I finished the whole thing did I realize that you haven't updated since 2016. I know through the authors notes that you also had some personal dilemmas, so I totally understand why you would have stopped writing to focus on your father, your son, and especially yourself, but I just want to let you know that I really enjoyed the story. This is not meant to pressure you in any way, but only to let you know that your writing is incredible and I appreciate that you shared it on this site. |
| I-am-sarah123 chapter 15 . 10/15/2018 I like |
| Guest chapter 29 . 6/20/2018 When are you going to be able to update again? |
| JayoftheSea chapter 29 . 5/9/2018 *sigh* I totally get it, but I also wish you would pick this story back up |
| Lady Ramona chapter 2 . 3/18/2018 Thanks...it's very good... |
| Lady Ramona chapter 1 . 3/18/2018 I've reread this one several times, don't think I've ever reviewed, and that's my dear is a disservice to an amazing author... Please do consider me chastised... Well done, well read and certainly not reviewed enough... |
| jb6423 chapter 29 . 3/13/2018 Love this story, please tell me you will finish it |
| nightsinshadow chapter 29 . 10/5/2017 Please update soon I need to know how this ends. |
| lukeskywalkeer chapter 29 . 7/5/2017 Well wishes to you and your family! I almost forgot about what was going on with Clay, whoops haha. Tig's witty one-liners were part of what made me fall in love with his character so I'm glad you've begun to incorporate that into your writing! Poor Hammer. She hasn't even been there for long and it already seems like Bella is treading on very thin ice. |
| lukeskywalkeer chapter 28 . 7/5/2017 Awww that was thoughtful. |
| lukeskywalkeer chapter 26 . 7/5/2017 Oh that's going to be awkward. "Guys, I'm not being murdered in the loo! Was just dreadfully unprepared for my monthlies!" |
