Great now I'm SOBBING

I'm crying and try to hold back my scream Its 1:00 AM

I SHIP! I SHIP SO HARD! IM GONNA CRY!(｡ŏ﹏ŏ)

Honestly, I'm not impressed so far. I had to force myself to slognit out and give it a chance, but 30 chapters in, I just gave up.

You've made many changes, substantial ones even such as raikage being at the chuunin exams, naruto bring a hanyou, haku, zabuza being alive, naruto's general skill level and mental maturity etc etc.

Which just makes the fact that all the key Canon events happen anyway despite all the factors stated above, even more jarring.

At this point, 30 chapters in, all I see is a rehash of Canon, with a smart aleck, know-it-all, must-make-a-smart-comment-but-gets-ignored-because-you-seem-too-lazy-to-write-a-proper-scene-outside-of-canon Naruto. And this is of course not to include all the other minor irritants such as... Muay Thai... Your hard on for trench coats... Basically all the Murica-machoism-jingoism-slangs you force in.

I've read your other works, and I've been suitably impressed with the changes wrought and the creativity so I know you have it in you. Then this story comes along and I'm so disappointed, I'm starting to think this was your first attempt at fanfic or something.

I like it, I usually don't like reading about naruto as a dumb kid, like most ff are. I usually read ff with a main OC. But here it seems that he will have some actual growth as a person. At least that is what I think and feel as I read this first chapter.

For anyone reading this: It is well written and the grammar is on point. I have only read this first chapter but it seems that this FF will be a good one.

Ps give him more than just wind

Hi man I really enjoyed your story upto chapter 17 it was fun reading it I unfortunately do not like your decision to make him part demon however it is your story so you are free to do as you like like I said I really enjoyed your story

Lol sasuke shrine I laughed so hard

Your og man I like it

LMFAO

I hate you. I hate the plot . Fuck. Why the fuck did it have to be that way . The original episode was sad enough , this is just ...you went way out of your way for that . Just... fuck you man . The chapter was too heavy . You made me cry . Fuck . I am screaming fuck atleast 10 times in one second.

Haku :(((((((((((((

This chapter was awesome, the message about the balance between negative and positivity emotions giving them more value was pretty cool and I loved this take on the Land of Waves arc

Stupid Arc, truly so far beneath your usual standard that I have to worry if you've acquired a Crack habit. Anyway, so as not to ruin my enjoyment of your story I'll just pretend you didn't waste the world's bandwidth with the last few ultra-shite chapters that should never of seen the light of day. Still. As punishment you should punch yourself in the genitals one thousand times, if you loose count, start from the beginning! #UtterShit

Wow, it isn't often that an author manages to make me growl and scroll through a chapter as quickly as possible. I have no idea what's happened in the last two chapters because the stench of stupid was too powerful. Reverting your MC to his pre-gennin days is annoying and you deserve to get kicked in the balls repeatedly by the Gai/Lee Combo until your soul evaporates into nothingness.