| Reviews for If You Believe That, I Have a Bridge to Sell You |
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maclooping chapter 1 . 7/20/2017 i really love this one ! you are totally catch "his scam sentence " and his attitude ! i particuary like the "selling sand in a desert" "you need flowers ? " and " trust me, i'm a art collector" ! Good work ! |
Yabbit chapter 1 . 2/8/2012 lol facey you da man :P |
vergissmeinnicht chapter 1 . 2/8/2011 Funny story. I was a bit taken aback at first, because Face really does act like a criminal there. But I suppose, that's what he _is_, so you're absolutely right to portray him this way. I tend to overlook his more criminal tendencies in favour of his, err, looks. I'm shallow, I suppose. By the way, I like your user name. Even though it doesn't actually translate as "dancing mushrooms". ;) In fact it's "(to) dance mushrooms", the mushrooms being in the accusative. What you were aiming for, would be "Tanzende Pilze". |
Long Live BRUCAS chapter 1 . 1/26/2011 I loved the scams Faced pulled off. Only he could do them. |
Tramontana chapter 1 . 1/16/2011 Haha, nice. I loved the one where Face sold the guy's own flowers back to him and the one where he kept the kid from buying alcohol. Nice look at Face's scamtastic skills. :) |
Trashbags chapter 1 . 1/12/2011 The scams Face pulled in this fic were ridiculous and so Face. I love Face and I can't believe that thos people actually fell for them, too! Although, Face probably could sell air conditioning to Eskimos.:) I enjoyed reading this! |
lovesanimals chapter 1 . 1/11/2011 Really cute story. Great work with Face's character and scams! I really love the way Face goes after the kid with the fake ID! Please keep writing for The A-Team! |
Invisible Ranger chapter 1 . 1/10/2011 If this is your first A-Team piece, I hope to read more from you soon. You have Face's character and fast-talking nature down well, and the "vignette" format is very effective and funny. Nicely done! |
Elf chapter 1 . 1/10/2011 Ha! That was nice. VERY nice! It's great to see Face portrayed as a cool, competent, smooth operator, something a lot of writers (and, let's face it, that includes a lot of the screenwriters from the show) don't bother doing. Thanks for sharing and I hope to see more from you. :D |
Liliththestormgoddess chapter 1 . 1/10/2011 Amazingly done! Classic Faceman scams, I loved it! I could really see him doing it, and the dialogue was perfect :)I really enjoyed this, thanks for sharing! ~Lily |
Kei Luna Shoryu chapter 1 . 1/10/2011 My oh my... It stories like this that almost put Face in an unflattering light...almost. ) And I do love a good scam. The only one I feel sorry for was the zen garden lady...Though really the elderly should be educated about these things all ready, non? All in all this was (relatively) fun to read. :p! Hope to see more soon. _ _ ...long live Zeus... o.o' |
VoicesInTheWind chapter 1 . 1/10/2011 This is terrific! I especially love Face stopping the kid with the fake ID. And turning the last scam around on the shop owner - awesome! The dialogue is perfect - you really have Face dead to rights in manner and the sort of scams he pulls. Wonderful job. I love it! -Voices |
memyselfandi89 chapter 1 . 1/10/2011 Lol! Go Face! I loved that, scamming his heart out and loving every minute of it, oh and of course leaving his ahem contributors feelings quite pleased with themselves. Suckers! |