So cute!

Great job! I wish you'd continue this... sort of. I mean it's really good but I also see how hard it could be to make a good story out of just how they became friends.

You got everyone's charater right, and put it in a reasonable light. I've seen some first meet stories that would be ok except they do some ridiculous things to get them to notice each other. honestly if she's the new girl, she's going to get attention. lol

Also you have alot of talent. Your writting is good, no noticable typos, or obvious grammar/spelling mistakes. Those always annoy me. It's not that hard to run a spell check you know? neways you did awesome so congrats :)

This is defiantly worth continuing. I really liked how Danny was explained and how Sam's appereance startled him because she wasn't like the other girls. I also liked how Danny was so oblivious to what life really is and everything :D :D :D :D I loved this one-shot. Although, it'd be nice if you did have the time to continue writing this. :D :D :D

Awweee, this was quite cute, and well written! Nice job!

Brilliantly written! Absolutely amazing! I'm looking forward to the next chapter! This is a great story, so far. Very intriguing.

I. Love. It.

This is awesome! Your grammar is great, therefore I can read it without mentally editing, you wrote each character's personality straight on, and you wrote about a sixth grader in a very believable way! Awesome-ness!

I love this story, and can't wait for your next update :)

-Mars.