Ehhh! Why is it that when kyubbi is a female, she acts like a slut? I mean literally in most fanfics I’ve read when Kyuubi is a female (which isn’t often because its usually a male) the fox always has to come off being that way...an angry female Kyuubi I understand, maybe even a sad female Kyuubi, but a female teasing lustful slutty kyubbi just sucks ass!

This story makes no sense

I still like this story a lot! I hadn't read for a long time, but your story keeps the little fluff with the adventure and action of a Naruto story. You shall see me around this story. :)

This is a farce which took 8 years in the making!

Ok no. If I'm right and Hinata is the pairing again, ima punch something. In this story, Hinata would make 0 sense. Please for the love of God in heaven, don't make it be her.

Type your review story delete naruto can access the buju and lost to cannon stupid naruto no affinity won the fifth here lost hahaha what a weakling naruto

Great story I really liked it a shame that you gave up on it.

Naruto is a puppet

i ABSOLUTELY LOVE UR STORIES !...oh..and..um...did u discontinue your story 'naruto of the immortal clan'?...please say no! its my most favorite fanfic ever...and i adore the naruhina ship..but still i love you and your stories so keep up the good work! -

I think the reason people think naruto is stupid is because he's ready to accept Kushina a Konoha shinobi so quickly based off a picture the tsuchikage gave him when he lied but refuses to accept anything to do with minato when it's blindingly obvious to him that the tsuchikage lied about everything

I loved the story very much
I want to know what their age exactly,r they 13?coz its unusual that they had such strong feelings and such..but all in all its a very verygood story..update soon please..

now that was a very good chapter to read it looks like he is getting closer to making a plan to save her i love it keep it up this is a great story to read thanks for your time in doing so for us to read thanks

I hope that Naruto will get Hinata out of this mess!

Too cute the fox idea was great and love how you showed Hinata having a mini breakdown. I kind of wish you kept the romantic moment where Hinata was cheered up by Naruto, but then we wouldn't have such cute moments with the fox.

The world will know not to mess with Naruto's girl.

Naruto and Hinata Forever:)

fuck hinata u fucking cunt go die