LOVED IT ,LOVED IT ,JUST LOVED IT A LOTTTT!

I loved it. Seriously Loved it. SIRIUSLY loved it. Oh my god it was brilliant...this is my second time reading through (first time commenting) and it's still an amazing read. Had me fully engaged the entire way through.

I like this story a lot. I like the premise, I like your version of James, I like Sierra, and I really like their relationship. All that said, I feel like you could have done a lot more with it.

There was a lot of missed potential, I thought. For one, there could have been more buildup. I liked what there was, but it felt like it was over so quickly. Also, there were a lot of great opportunities for seeing Sierra's perspective that weren't taken. We get such a great look at her loneliness at the beginning, but we don't really get inside her head again until James and Fred have banished it. A lot more of the transition would have been really interesting, I think.

Finally, it ends too soon. Not only did it feel like we didn't get to enjoy James and Sierra together long enough, there's a built-in second conflict in the form of her final year of school without her best friends. Will things go back to the way they were for her before? Will she shrink back into her shell or keep her new confidence? Will people return to treating her badly now that her protectors are gone, and if so, how does she stand up for herself?

As I said, a lot of great stuff that I felt really bummed to miss out on, but that's only because the foundation you provided was so good. I cared about these characters and wanted to see more of them, and in terms of story structure I felt like a lot of it was just kind of glossed over.

AHHHHH! It's so cute! I love the thought of Luna's kids! I bet they're adorable. And I love that James sees through everyone's teasing of Sierra and loves her anyway! Gah!

I. LOVE. THIS.

Oh, and I really like Sirius/Hermione Timetravel fics.

But SERIOUSLY, I TOTALLY DIG THIS.

WHAT THE HELL DID I JUST SAY.

I really like the story! I can only hope that you write more amazing story's like this one. You are am amazing author and I want you to always remember that! Thank you for writing the story I so very much enjoyed!

OH MY GOSH THAT WAS BEAUTIFUL I THINK I SHIP SIERRA AND JAMES HARDER THAT LUNA DOES HAHA I LOVED TI

Awww first fanfic I've read in this generation other then teddy and victorie I know sad rigt but I loved it :)

i love this story, its so cute (:

I LOVED IT!

Lily Lorcan!

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TOO FUNNY! Xd

I like it!

I love the character Sierra, hopefully you'll write more fanfict's on her and james, loved this story! So original :)