Awwww! Cuteeee! -Cat.

YAY YAY YAY YAY YAY THANK YOU :))

you did a perfect job :3 Cause it fits perfectly and I could totally see that happening :3

O_O I was thinking this exact scene during the movie

Awwww, cute! That was good! I've always kinda had a little pang in my mind that said "Roy and Mullet slash". xD

Awww, glad to see I'm not the only one that slashed the heck out of this book. Er, movie... book/movie. :p Very cute. Roy's first kiss, hehe.

This was so sweet! Great job! Please write more! D

AWWWWW! that was sweet! I liked it alot.

i feel like this isn't even a fanfic, it's totally there in the movie ;) just, for some reason, i can never get my DVD player to show it...maybe there's a scratch on the CD or something...it makes me sad, because i'm SURE they kiss in there somewhere. they've got to.

anyway, this fits very well into the movie (not just because i swear the scene belongs in there), the tone matches very well, and i think you did a good job blending the scene into the section around it. i was actually trying to replay the scene in my mind when i read this, and i can definitely picture the characters doing this perfectly. they're both so obviously staring at each other through the whole thing that it makes total sense.

i like the way this little scene leaves the rest up to the reader. i can imagine so much adorable angstiness in their future (and long walks on the beach...ha...)

makes me smile.

anyway rambling review but basically very adorable, while also not too fluffy (dark chocolate opposed to candy hearts, i guess...yup, that's definitely roy and mullet fingers)