Amazing i almost started to laugh at the discovery channel thing but then my mom would catch me up later then i am suppose to be

MAKE PICTURES

*LAUGHING MY FUCKING ASS OFF!* AT THE LAST PART! btw i love it! ! :)

The discovery channel (is crying from laughing so hard)lol lol lol lol ...

its funny I like it and was shady singing if so wat song was dat

wow that was bad

THIS. IS. BULLSHIT!
(Seriously, the fuck?)

I don't really get it that much..

koool story lollz

I like the part when Shadow proposed to Amy

NO.

Thats it? seriously? I dont even consider this a lemon its so small and without any details at all! and for crying out loud when youre writting a fanfiction story at least try to remain the characters personality because Shadow wouldnt be the type of guy that would give lots of presents and say I love you all te time...I say this in positive opinion so you can get better because I too write lemon stories and I used to be just like you until I received several bad reviews about not having any details or constant content so good luck with your next lemon.

'like the discovery channel' i love it

AWESOME YEAH HE SHOULD SUCK HER BOOBIES MHM!

Damn this story is SHIT. Its no wonder there are such negative stereotypes of fan fiction writers as illiterate morons with crap like this floating around as proof...and I friggin love fanfiction.
Sigh...