Reviews for Perfection |
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210843q2938402 chapter 1 . 11/21/2011 i generally like rusame or ruscan or something... but this is an exeption! i love this story :') maye consider writing more russiabelarus stories? plz? *sniffle |
Ankhasia Riddle chapter 1 . 10/16/2011 i loved it |
TearsOfTheFullMoon chapter 1 . 6/30/2011 I loved it. I always want to read a fan fic about their wedding, but I can never find one...I'm glad you wrote this. Even though it turned out to be a dream. It was still amazing. And anyone who complains about OOC can become one with something. something rough and sandpapery, to quote my friend. :) |
Tamer of Demons chapter 1 . 5/29/2011 Woah! That was pretty cool! When the genre said tragedy, I thought Russia was gonna kill himself to avoid marrying her (cause he'd obviously rather kill himself than marry her), but it was actually a dream (Thank Goodness!) ! And Belarus killed herself insted! And the detail was beautiful! Poor Belarus though...But still, as Prussia would say, AWESOME! |
RandomAmp chapter 1 . 4/15/2011 I cried so much~ I was so happy to see this where she got her happy end and Ivan liked it and then... oh. A dream. WELL GOD D*MN THAT WAS THE BEST SUICIDE FIC EVER WRITTEN FOR BELARUS. |
finisque chapter 1 . 1/29/2011 OMG THIS IS SO PRETTY WHAT IS THIS. *A* / I love how you made the entire wedding seem so blissful and happy, and how you wrote the devastation Bela felt when she realised it was all a dream. It was all so insane and sad but I love you for writing it because it felt so real. ;n; I love how you portray Bela. So well done. 3 /gives huggles and chocolate |
Anonymous Llama chapter 1 . 1/28/2011 This story isn't very "ooc" at all. It's a pretty accurate portrayal of a dream by Russia's whackasscrazy sister. The ending was indeed a surprise. Like being punched in the gut when you expect a hug. I might just be horrible, but when I read "drowning in glass confetti" I couldn't help but laugh a little. -Llaahmah |
Yellowhappyamy-chan chapter 1 . 1/18/2011 You broke my heart! U.U poor Natalia... |
SilverKnox chapter 1 . 1/18/2011 holy crap, i was really expecting a happy ending where she and Ivan married (i still would of been creeped out) casue it just looks so awesome but then you just dropped a bomb on that thought and then this at the end, all i can say is Wow just wow casue this was a really cool story and i'm glad i got to finish it today |
The Fox Familiar chapter 1 . 1/9/2011 ...I actually like your portrayal of Belarus. You know, this is a tragic story, and it'd be nice if Hetalia had used this to give Belarus more...personality. |
high improbability chapter 1 . 1/9/2011 Oh...wow. Powerful, but the ending was a little jarring. However, you did capture Belarus' emotions quite well. |