I like the idea of the story, but it progressed way too fast. Merlin should have been more reluctant about his feelings, pushing Arthur away before finally letting him in. That's all I have to say, but I still enjoyed the read.

-Charmy

So good! I want more in this verse! :)

'My face is up here.' I would have died had I been Merlin in that situation. I mean damn that must have been embarrassing...:D

xoxo HinaKicksAss

MANY THANKS FOR PUTTING ARTHUR AND MERLIN TOGETHER AND WITH .

yet another wonderful story..though i have found one thing in most of your stories that is kind of a trademark for you..it's arthur saying "come for me baby." lol wondered if you realised you did that or not. -

brilliant story! thanks

I AM GLAD THAT MERLIN AND ARTHUR GOT TOGETHER WITH EACHOTHER BECAUSE THEY LOVE EACHOTHER AND THEY ARE A VERY VERY FANTASTIC COUPLE.I LOVE MERLIN AND ARTHUR VERY VERY MUCH INDEED.I LOVE THE STORIES THAT YOU WRITE AND YOUR A BRILLANT PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE WRITE MORE OF YOUR BRILLANT STORY THAT IS CALLED MERLIN'S SISTER BECAUSE I WANT TO READ MORE OF THAT STORY AND I LOVE BEING MERLIN'S SISTER HELEN BECAUSE NOT ONLY IS SHE NAMED AFTER ME SHE DEFINATLY IS ME BECAUSE MY NAME IS OF THE STORY MERLIN'S SISTER PLEASE PLEASE ASAP?.LOVE FROM I HAD A LOVELY BIRTHDAY TODAY AND THANKYOU FOR WISHING ME HAPPY BIRTHDAY.

I am so glad that Merlin and Arthur got together because they defiinatly definatly love eachother.I love Merlin and Arthur most definatly.

hahahah nice just nice i loved it great job

loved it 3 3 3

Loved it.

Very hot. Looking forward to more of your stories.

Loved It! :D

So hot! merlin catch up really fast