Cute. So cute.

OK.
I love your story so far, I really think it has potential. But it looks like you are not gonna continue this nice story.
So either continue or delete it.
It has not been touched for years.
Please think about it.

This is amazing! Love your story! Please continue!

lol yeah really slow;) Can't wait for more.

aww this is so cute c: Very in character, I could definitely see this happening

Very nice, very well paced. Gotta love S/C.

Awesome job. Love it. Catch ya on the flip side.

Nice. I like it. Catch ya on th flip side.

I like this kinda different the most ones i read were both of them love each other neither of them knew this time cory pulls away hehe really good!

In his haste to get inside the pants, his foot caught on the waistband, causing him to trip. He hit the ground, hard.

i read this and i laughed i could picture him down that in the show and saying "owe" like he does lol

very good need a lot more cory/shawnie slashies!

I like this chapter also. I love how Shawn was confessing his feelings and did not know that Corey was there.

Dear rifster, this story is great I'm a big Shawn/Corey fan. I like the imagery of this chapter.

honestly, i made an account on just to review this story. this was an incredible depiction of somebody struggling to come to terms with their feelings. i loved shawn's inner monologue in the park, and i just wanted to say update soon. this rocks.