An epic scene-setter.

Damn! At the end, I was left wanting so much more! This was merely the first chapter of a multichapter story only you did write it! I really want to know how well the two got along. Whether or not they ever actually made a true BOLO out of her.

I'd just like to read the rest of this story... Where please?

WOW! Really gets your attention ! Where's the rest ?

Wow! That's a pretty impressive build-up. I really catches ones imagination. What happens next?
With this kind of writing... this I'd buy. In a heartbeat.

Nice start.

For a while I was wondering what the Discworld part was... Should I be more worried or less worried that Ankh doesn't call himself Vimes? ~GraysonPaladin

Pure awesome

sweet