| Reviews for Cheese |
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claraowl chapter 1 . 5/9/2014 Amusing. XD |
purple kimono chapter 1 . 7/3/2011 Oh, I can totally imagine them as being the most adventurous royal couple ever. You just made me think of the rest of the kingdom dreading Rapunzel's birthday just because of the crazy things she and Eugene will do. You really got their personalities and you incorporated the cheese thing really well, too. Keep it up! |
Neptune47 chapter 1 . 1/10/2011 YAY! You wrote a Tangled story! And unsurprisingly it rocks! You've really nailed Flynn/Eugene's voice. And of course his adoration for Rapunzel is adorable! I hope you write more! |
emm297 chapter 1 . 1/10/2011 HAHA I loved this :D It was so cute, and I think you got Eugene's personality right :) |
1008604 chapter 1 . 1/9/2011 You have Eugene down to a SCIENCE. That's all I can really say. I am incredibly jealous. This is a very good story and you wrote it very well. |
ProfessorSpork chapter 1 . 1/8/2011 This is absolutely adorable. |
TickleTheToast chapter 1 . 1/8/2011 Very nice title, with the figurative reference to cheese. Admittedly, I use that a lot, too. But the way you started the story in the middle of the action, then slowly unraveled the beginning and end in the middle, was wonderful. It takes some talent to be able to do that successfully without confusing the reader. Great job! Keep writing! ~Ashe* |
Twilifed113 chapter 1 . 1/8/2011 this was pretty hilarious and i loved it |