Could feel how much Kono and Steve wanted to be with each other. Steve considering Kono reputation over acting on his feelings was so considerate of him. I still hope you decide to do a sequel to "Soon". I would like to see Kono and Steve act on their feelings for one another.

This was a great read! I like that you didn't have Kono just fall into his arms and she actually he considered her repuatation and career and it's good that Steve understood that. I love the sense of hope for "soon" that you leave us with!

I like this, but I think that you can stretch this out a bit. It would make a great multi chapter fic.

Is Soon up yet? great story and I for one would like to see what happeded after!

Great Story! Loved It! Please Continue It :-)

It's very good! A second chapter please ? :D (Imagine a big smile like Mister Steve McGarrett but I'm a girl :D)

OMG! This is the best! Please write more than one page!

Second Chapter? pretty plz :)

excellent work.

I am in love with Kono/steve stories right now. This was very subtle but just enough to leave the reader satisfied. I love your usage of switching povs between kono and steve, it was easy to follow. I also like your style of writing, it flows very nicely.

You should write some more kono/steve stories. Too cute. .

What a sweet story...I hope you do continue...can't wait to see what's in store for Steve & Kono and if they'll do something about their feelings :-)

I think the ending is just fine. Lots of unsolved tension, and that's believable given how the situation is. Great story.

Such a cute story! I hope you can post a sequel!

Loved it! So cute!

I liked the ending and you should write a sequel. I loved the scene with Steve and Kono covered in white paint... adorable. Looking forward to your next stories.