Didn't Snape tell Voldemort early on that Harry had the hots for him? That wouldn't bode well. It's unsettling that Harry is only 16 and being buggered and plied with alcohol by severe Snape. In my mind Snape wouldn't go after a minor-hottie though he may be! If Snape is murdering innocents then I won't be too impressed! Good writing.

Woaw, indeed it was very dark at the beginning. I struggled to read through and I haven’t been disappointed! I like it, and the chapter where Snape gets distracted three times in class is so funny! Welp, on to go see the translation on the Snarry blog. There are even drawings to tell some of the story. It’s really a full story. Thanks for delivering a part of it translated!

Love it. Wish there was more.

hi just found this story and your video you did on it a few days ago really enjoying the story so much, can't stop reading it heheh

For those of you who want to finish reading the story, it is available in Portuguese, so if you search this title in your browser and then use google translate on the link, you are able to read it. Obviously some parts won't be completely accurate, as translate is not the most reliable thing, but you get used to it as the finished version has 87 chapters.

what in merlins pants...

Wow this is good

PLEASE UPDATE THIS IS BEAUTIFUL AND I LOVE IT PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE CONTINUE THIS IS GREAT AND ITS MY FAV STORY :))) 3

Update please.

Please keep translating this! I'm loving this story and it sucks there is no ending!

I LOVE IT! ADD MORE PLEASE!

This is so hauntingly lovelorn and desperately lost. I don't know what happened with Draco after Severus killed Narcissa but it doesn't sound good. Voldemort is winning in this fic and Dumbledore wants Harry to die for their world as his mother sacrificed herself for Harry...hmm wonder if that's where he first got the idea?

Severus is doing something in his secret potions room but is it for Harry or Voldemort? And why did he obliviate Harry of his nightmare? Was it because he saw they came from Voldemort and was afraid Voldemort would notice him via Harry if allowed to continue?

So much to wonder about. Thanks for writing an incredible story. You successfully navigate the really difficult emotions of a teenager in first love, his shame and growing awareness of his true infatuation but developing skills. Hard to do.
Oh yes, yay Luna! Glad she got Tonks.

Please update It's almost been 2 years This is too good a story to leave behind

Moooore! I love this so much!

Has the translation on this fic been canceled or dropped ? It hasn't been updated in 2 years so it makes me very sad . This is a beautiful and provocative story that doesn't shy away from or apologize for its dark and gritty tone . And sometimes you just want to read some Angst . This is one of my favorites in the Snarry Genre so i hope it gets an update sometime in the near future.