Nice!

You got their dialogue so incredibly right!

Good story. :)

I love this! Wonderful! I hope you don't take this the wrong way, but they remind me of the show The Sentinel. Holmes as the sentinal and watson as his guide... lol I think I am dating mysel. Anyways, wonderful story!

Beautiful story! Absolutely wonderful :)

Beautiful piece of work. That is a very nice story of how I think their relationship should be. Absolute trust, but a word is never spoken. You did a really, really good job with this one.

Sherlock clearly needs a Guardian, and John seems to do much better in life with someone to guard. Good description of Sherlock's panic at the crime scene, and his panic attack later.

I think there are two words that should maybe be deleted from the below section (I put the two words in capital letters):

This IS ought to feel awkward, but right now John actually doesn't give a damn. Signing contentedly, he closes his eyes, and in THE mere moments drifts into deep, undisturbed sleep...