| Reviews for Torn Apart |
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Johnnyjayo chapter 2 . 8/22/2013 Well I was glad to know that don...and mike did feel longing to their original family, .. But then mikey was like'he'll by and I will kill him'sheesh mikey he was just a kid ..makes me wonder if raph had intentionally killed someone dear to mikey or something..maybe that'll explain it ..though I really hope that all these 'they gonna payback with their lives' thought.. Are only just empty thoughts .. :( |
Johnnyjayo chapter 1 . 8/22/2013 Ok I had to stop reading in the middle of this when mikey pinned raph with his foot at his neck.. Even though this story seems good, there's something really not right. I mean.. Aren't donnie and mikey acting WAY TOO dramaticly? Ya know running away and start hating on the whole freakin family? And then even almost 10 years later come back wanting revenge? Whoa Really sheesh ..only 'cause of a couple of times that a kid raphie had injured mikey and only 'cause leo didn't beat up raph for it? That's no reason at all really. and even at some point raph remembered that this was not the little brother he used to come to him when scared or what ever it was meaning raph was good to mikey, and maybe just hurt him 'cause he was just a stupid little boy like most boys are. Anyway i'll keep reading this, it may not be convincing but i'll try to enjoy it anyway :-) And I hope my review wasn't coming out mean 'cause I'm really not trying to be a mean-jerk here or anything.. sorry 4 any spelling mistakes if there's one. mikey's my favorite turtle ;p. |
tmntlover2013 chapter 4 . 8/2/2012 Great job on the story so far, I liked it alot, please keep going and update real, real, real, soon thanks. |
Pariseiffle chapter 3 . 1/18/2012 ooohh it's been a year, but please update! :D |
Puldoh chapter 3 . 1/11/2012 DUDE, SERIOUSLY, WHEN ARE YOU GOING TO UPDATE! THIS IS AWESOME, I WOULD LOVE MORE, EVIL MIKE AND DON, WANTING REVENGE ON BROS. LOVING IT! MORE MORE MORE UPDATE LIKE ASAP! PLEASE, OR IS IT DISCONTINUED? PLEASE LET ME KNOW THANKIES |
Denny Hamato chapter 3 . 10/29/2011 the story is getting very interesting. hope the next chapter is up soon. |
jade4563 chapter 3 . 7/15/2011 the suspense is killing please update soon! :D |
Infinitechange chapter 3 . 3/25/2011 Creepy and interesting story so far. |
Dark-Angel-Princess 01 chapter 3 . 3/1/2011 PLEASE UPDATE SOON ! |
tmntlover2013 chapter 3 . 2/22/2011 Great job on the story I like it alot, please keep going and update real soon thanks. |
Lovelinelivelong639 chapter 3 . 1/18/2011 MUST READ MORE! so PLEASE PLEAASE PLEASSSSE update soon! I love the story and can't wait for more! |
Angel Tifa chapter 3 . 1/17/2011 I really love this AU. It's interesting, please continue! |
StillThunder86 chapter 2 . 1/12/2011 What is it about the boys going bad that is so intriguing? I'm so freaking excited to see where this goes! It's awesome! Can I beg for an update soon? Consider me begging! |
Puldoh chapter 1 . 1/8/2011 AWESOME, I know I read this somewhere else before and wished it was updated. Please update soon. I'm loving it. Thank again |