this is a very compelling twist of events, though I don't like Arthur's ongoing non-con but the rest of it makes me want to keep reading and know how things would be different if he had an older brother.

"'The paths of fate-' '-need to get a map'" was the funniest thing I've read in a while! I can just imagine their tone of voices. I can't stop giggling at just the thought of it.

I wasn't expecting this to be good, but it is.
Very good.
Shame it's discontinued.

Hi,
I have read some of your stories and the plots seem really nice but they have not been updated in a long time.. I hope you update them soon.

Excellent!

Wow. Awesome.

Fantastic chapter.

Great story! Love this take on the series

Please update soon, I know you haven't in a while but this story is so good it can't be left open ended, it makes me curious as to what happens to Madog.

Also if you plan on using season 5, let Gwaine and Arthur live, I'm begging you.

More?

I can't wait to read what happens next! 3

This is my third time re-reading this and everytime I forget to review! Sorry about that!

In any case, I really love this story and the part with the trolls was probably my second favorite part. My favorite part was Merlin finding out about Arthur's 'duty' and getting rightly angry about it.

I guess I just love fics where Arthur is that one that's broken instead of it being Merlin. And this is definately one of my favorite ones.

I hope you can update when you can.

I realise that you like long reviews given that little paragraph at the end of this chapter, but I really only have one word for you: MORE!

loooove it :) 33
you have got to be the best writer in all of history(maybe a little exaggerating, but i Reeally like your way of writing))

This is a great story! I love it, but at the same time I hate it because it makes me what to cry! How could any parent use their child like that? But I’m glad that Arthur has Merlin now, and that Arthur knows about his magic. I can’t wait to see what’ll happen next!