Thanks for redeeming Kevin by revealing his insecurities and doubts. Loved the phrase "a striking contrast of light and dark."

I enjoyed reading She Use To Be Mine. I liked how Kevin was mad at himself and took responsibility for the end of his relationship with Penelope.

- Bren

Personally, I like Kevin and Garcia together so I don't like that aspect of the story but it is well written. I thought you were able to capture Kevin's feeling really well.

such a better choice for our Penelope.

I guess Keven realized what is lost in Pen. I'm glad Pen ended up with Rossi.