hey, i love the concept of your story and i'm really sad that you won't be continuing it however I have become interested in it and, with your permission, i would like to adopt and continue it.

if you do say yes i assure you that all due credit will go to you when i start the story.

please contact me as soon as possible

-Alyssa Kuga

Oh... Okay. I guess that works...? I really liked you story and I thought you were purposefully making her a Mary-Sue just so you could build on that and change her out of her Mary-Sue-ness. *shrugs* Oh well. I'm looking forward to seeing if you pick this up and for whatever you write in the future.

Youngling, please get someone to beta your story. It's very good, but you have some trouble with sentence structure that a good beta reader could help you with. Write more, please.

! OhmiGod! YOou HAVE to write more!

Wow... This is a pretty friggin' EPIC story so far! You HAVE to write more!

Wow! That is an amazing take on an OC! I love this so far; please update soon. :D

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! You HAVE to update NOW! Pa-lEASE!