I love this story soooooo much. There relationship is so unique and special. You really showed her slow descent into being mentally unstable. I really wish he didn't die! It's so sad, they deserve a happy ending!

I really like this story, but you had a tendency to switch from first person to third person limited for a paragraph or two and then switch back, which, to a grammar nut like me, was fairly annoying. You also kept switching between spellings of Phillippa's name; sometimes it would be "Phillippa," others "Fillippa." But the story overall was wonderful.

nice story! but I wonder Annie's age on this story? fifteen or sixteen on the reaping? why she say that finnick was two years younger that she is now?

OH MY GOSH I LOVE THIS SO MUCH UGHHHHH IM CRYING

Omg, the feels! This is the best fanfiction ever! This should be published into a book. My heart broke more in this than reading the actual series. You have mixed your story with the plot so well, I can't tell them apart. I NEED your writing skills.

That was soooo sweet! I'm crying now. Would you be able to make a chapter where Annie and Finnick meet in death? It would set me soul at ease.

Gorgeous.

I love this story. I love Finick and Annie's love story, it is so beautiful and tragic. Thank you for writing this

Yes, I'm on city of glass right now, and my sister already finished city of heavenly fire

This is so good! The best annie/finnick fanfiction I've read!

This story is sooooo sweet! Thank you! And I added this story to my "favorite" lists!

Lovely. :-)

lovely! :-)

love it!

You're going at a decent pace, so don't worry. ;-)