This is just terriable you turned a really great character Damon into a pervy wimp. do you not watch the show? Do you not like Damon as a character is that why you are destroying him? Damon is hot yes and he know hes hot but he also know how to be suductive and charming not a sexual predator that you made him. He is mean and sarcastic but not stupid and he would more like threaten torture or murder not rape. I mean you made it so hard to ship these character with how written both of them they are just terrable they may has well be oc. And Damon pissing himself come on he went up against vampires much older then him were wolfs, originals, monsters he knew could kill him. he is brave and even if he is weaker he is smart and like i said cunning. I dont think you have seen the show because even though i am reading this years later then when you published it he has been that way since the beginning. I know the story is finished but i have to end it here.I really liked alot of the twilight vampire diaries crossovers especially when it is Bella/Damon but this just isnt Damon. I think you should rewatch the Show.

Gosh I love me some Damon sort of didn’t like him being weaker than the Cullens it was a bummer but atleast it didn’t stop him from standing up to them. I was annoyed with them until they stuck by her and was happy to see Edward ass finally finally leave. Fun story loved it.

edward is till a dumb f..k, acting like his seventeen year old self, i hope emmett rips his head off and rose tears out all of katherine's hair.

have edward and katherine been plotting with the volturi? that was katherine that edwaed was talking to wasn't it?

edward is still a dick weed! just because she loved him once he thinks she will again? and alice knows her better than anyone? did she know how much she hated bella barbie and just didn't care?

This was good.
I wish there was more though because it seems not quite finished or in need of a sequel?
It’s not very often that people make the Cold Ones the stronger vampire version but it’s very good. I enjoyed reading it.

Damon and Bella seem like mates.
God Edward is Such a Controlling ass hole. Bella’s mental state is just fine. God he probably wouldn’t deem her mental state fine unless she agrees to be with him. God I HATE Edward in this story so much.

Yeah. I’ll admit that them being two faced throughout the show was probably the hardest part. There’s way to much backstabbing in TVD that’s for sure.

Hahaha. Ohh god I love her in this!

They are such jerks right now aren’t they. I’m proud of Bella though.

I’m glad she’s not instantly backing down. She doesn’t even know them. They’re being pushy and rude.

This was so bloody cute! I loved Embry and his Sweet Caroline every morning.

I love this story

For the holidays, I'm going through all my favorite fics and making sure to comment on them to show my appreciation!
I love Damon/Bella fics and yours (both of yours I suppose I should say) are the best! This fic is a wild ride and I'm so glad I got to enjoy it! Have you considered moving your fics to AO3 though? It allows both NSFW and multiple comments!
Keep up the great work and happy holidays!

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