Good story. I liked the detailed precision in your story, even if I prefer a bit more Tuddrussel/Larry. But I liked it!

XD Beautiful. It's like, I know not to take it seriously because it's based off of a cartoon and stuff, so the sensuality makes me laugh so hard. XD And also the fact that I understand things about computers and geek squad innuendos only recently as opposed to when I first watched it as a little kid. XD

"So shiny~"

One thing I gotta ask and desperately want answered. Can you explain the movement and the ending line to me?

Oh, and if you plan on writing more, cuz, you're awesome at it. :D

~TMRomance

Great overall, simply adore your ending there. You chose your words perfectly to describe Larry's situation. Though iv'e always thought of XJ5 to be a straight man. Robot. (I know reprogramming came in. Still.)

But what can I say? Who can resist The Lawrence 3000?